last argument

To be is going to the exam room and write for the whole 30 points VS.To assign the learners to work at home and turn it in on the due date


For me, I support the assigning learners to work at home, and turn it in on the due date because it is the better chance for the learners to improve, and get more score. I think the good writing work must be written for a long time, so they need the longer period to do. They cannot write the good work under the stressful situation as three hours in the exam period absolutely. Moreover, there will be more time for them to edit the work because at the first time of writing, they won’t see their mistakes. Thus, they can check the convention, idea, grammar, and other mistakes within this longer period for getting the high mark. Also, they will develop their writing skill more from self-checking.

In my attitude, I support the writers to teach the writing course because of their qualification. Firstly, writer is the job that deals with writing skill; besides, the writers are the professional of writing as they usually write their works. Secondly, they used to write a lot of stories in their work, so they will have many experiences than the people who have a degree in teaching English. Thirdly, the writer can choose the beautiful, creative, and suitable words choices for the work; thereby, they will transfer the sense of language, or describe the story better than the people who have a degree in teaching English. Finally, the writer may focus on the practices more than the theories. Hence, the student will get more practices and improvement of their writing skill. Although teaching in writing course is not the right work of the writer, in my opinion, they are more appropriate to teach student than the people who have a degree in teaching English.

After I read this argument, I differ with the point that Mae Fah Luang University will not take part in anything concerning this issue. As MFU are supported to build for educational object by the majority of population in Chiang Rai, all of students, teachers, and other officers here should help or cooperate with people in this province. At MFU, there are many professors; furthermore, MFU is near Mae Chan district. Therefore, we should join with them in this issue as the academic institution as you mention. At lease, we should illustrate either villagers or activists that the transport of lignite will cause the poor respiratory system of them. We should care the health of people more than the business.

part by part essay

I disagree with your point. In my opinion, part by part essay writing will slow the process, and decrease the accuracy of the work. I think the best way of essay writing should not be separated to three parts that are an introductory part, a body part, and a conclusion part as you said. Because each student has to write only one part by their self for a long time, and have only one time to peer with the partner. The students will lack of the accuracy of their essay before they submit to the teacher. Thus, the score will be low. On the other hand, if they write it every part at one time, they will peer with their partner, and edit the essay two to three times before they send to the teacher, so not only the score, but also the quality of the accuracy will be higher.

Should the students ware the uniform?

I oppose with your point even if the student can study, and the teacher can teach as usual, but the room will be disunity. The clothes, that are not the uniform, will be used to classify the social status of each student. Thus, poorer students might be shy or depressed with their clothes. Besides, it might become the fashionable competition of the richer students, so they will pay less attention to their education. In brief, although you think, the clothes or dressing doesn’t help in improving students' ability in learning or thinking critically, it shows the equality of all students in education. Also, they will study with their friends and their teacher without fashionable or social conflicts.

Effects

Many days ago, I read the news on the website, and I found the news about suicide: it’s very interesting. In the news story, the six years girl suicide unexpectly by hanging her neck on a branch of the three meters tree in front of her house due to the fact that she tried to show her another twin how the actress “E-Yen” in Sai-Sok killed her self, but she failed. In addition to watching, they try to imitate what they learn form the television by their self without any suggests from adult, especially their parents. This situation shows us how curious they are, and the real life dramas are not suitable for the children. Hence after this news published the rating for drama is also stricter.

Priority

In a week, I have to frequently face with many assignments which all teachers assign me like I never have any assignments, for example five pieces of journal keeping and lab assignment of English though newspaper course, journal of literature II course, etc. I have to arrange it by the date and time that I have to submit it, and don’t concern with its difficulty because I think I must submit all assignments to the teacher exactly. Regularly, I prioritize the assignments which I must submit it within that week first because its due date is less than seven days. It’s foremost. If you send it late, it will affect on my score or my grade absolutely. And then the assignments that its due date are the following week or next two week. I will do it on weekend, and I often do it gradually- while I did a particular assignment, I may play online games, watch movie, surfing the internet, and also do the other homework too. However, my finished assignments are rather good in quality because my emotion can affect on quality of the works. This is the way I prioritize my countless job.

Unforgettable fondness

Fondness is not beautiful as I used to think because once it used to hurt me without any mercy, until now this feeling’s still in my mind. Every time when I fall in love with someone, that feeling’s going to pop up in my mind immediately. This is the worst memorial loving story that happened in my childhood, I thought that everything on this world is very beautiful: there are full of love, mercy, funny, wish, warmth, peace and happiness in my innocence eyes. I seldom received the feeling like sadness, disappointment and regret genuinely because my lovely family took care me as the prince of the house. Nevertheless, I have to face more with the truth when I grow up. Many years ago, I fell in love with somebody who was my classmate. I was very happy when I was close to him. My face would turn to be red like a mature apple. Moreover, my heart beat in the wrong step, and more power as if it would jump out of my chest, this time is so wonderful. Anyway, when I told him that I loved him for a long period, he couldn’t accept my first innocence love. After that, he never talks to me as usual, even if looking at my face. This was the worst situation which I faced with my pure sight. In addition, this situation made me know how much the ferocity the world has, and made me grow up more than ever. Thus this is the big wound that make me fear, and don’t dare to love anyone who I like.

unforgettable fondness

Since I was born till my childhood, I thought that everything on this world is very beautiful: there are full of love, mercy, funny, wish, warmth, peace and happiness in my innocence eyes. I seldom received the feeling like sadness, disappointment and regret genuinely because my lovely family took care me as the prince of the house. Nevertheless, I have to face more with the truth when I grow up. Many years ago, I fell in love with somebody who was my classmate. I was very happy when I was close to him. My face would turn to be red like a mature apple. Moreover, my heart beat in the wrong step and more power as if it would jump out from my chest, this time is so wonderful. Anyway, when I told him that I loved him for a long period, he couldn’t accept my first innocence love. After that, he never talks to me as usual, even if looking at my face. This was the worst situation which I faced with my pure sight. In addition, this situation made me know how much the ferocity the world has, and made me grow up more than ever. Thus this is the big wound that make me fear, and don’t dare to love anyone who I like until now.

I’m happy because…..

Every times when I watch Korean series, I’m always very happy, and I’m still happy all day. Many of you may suspect how it can make me happy; it’s just a story as Thai drama. The first reason is the story, the actor and actress are more attractive than Thai drama, and it makes me concentrated seriously. Then, another reason is I think I ‘m the leading lady of that series. No matter when she is or falls in love with the handsome leading actor; it makes me embarrass. When she is so sad or she is crying: it also makes me gloomy, but in fact, nothing happens to me. Even through many sad Korean series make me sad, I’m still happy because I’m still the leading lady. Happy Happy Happy ^-^ I’m happy to think like this..

The Hardest Thing.

I always believe that everyone must have the thing which they cannot do, or solve it easily at least one thing that is the hardest thing for them. The hardest thing for some of them might be the ability to forget something or someone that you have the bad and good experience with. However, I think, the hardest thing for me is to find or seek the thing that I don’t know absolutely that where it is because there aren’t any hint or sign to tell me: I just know what it is. Therefore, it is too hard to find it as to find the needle in the ocean. I got this idea from the real situation of my friend, and she might think as me too. Many days ago, I went to my friend’s dormitory, and found that she was finding the ring which is her mother gave her many months ago. She tried to find that ring again and again, and she didn’t know when and where it lost. I and she helped together to seek it every where, no matter where, her bed, her table, or in the bathroom seriously for a long time, and then we didn’t find it. She was so sad, and worried: it’s like the tear in her eyes, but she didn’t cry out. Additionally, when I came back to my dormitory, she continued to seek it all night. Next day, she still sought it with expectation. However, many days later, she didn’t found it, so she was so hopeless. Finally, she made a decision that she didn’t want to find it any more, and she told me that if something belong to us, someday we will find, and get it accidentally.

It’s not only item, but also person. When we long for someone who also known as soul mate, but we don’t know who (s)he is, where (s)he is, and when’ll we meet together. This situation is as hard as seeking the item with out hint, or sign.

The work of mind

When we are worried, we would like to relax for ourselves. However, we might be still worried, and we might treat this feeling for a long time as I’m doing. Now I am standing beside the window and looking out the window to relax because I’m stressful, but I cannot see any way to fix my problem. Since I graduated from the university till now, I have been rejected by every company where I applied, so at this moment I don’t have enough money to pay for a debt which I borrowed from countless people many months ago. Moreover, my parents must pay their money for my younger sister to study at high school, and my younger brother to study in the university. I am still very anxious because there are very few advertise the careers which I can do no matter where in the newspaper or website. I graduated from the university with the efficiency, but why didn’t they let me work with them, or I have no enough qualification for that particular work; I’m really serious. In addition, how I can get the money to pay for everyday life, and the countless debt. After I looked out the window, I didn’t see any way to solve this problem; there is no hope in my eyes, and I want to die. Perhaps, this is the last way for me to leave this situation now and forever.

Season in my heart

When I walk in the garden, and see many little new light green leaves on the top of the trees and bushes. It’s like the new beginning of life, and it makes me fresh and cheerful. However, it doesn’t impress me anymore whereas the season which fascinates me is the winter because it’s the representative of loneliness, peace and beautiful. I like to lie down on the mat in the garden. I look at the trees, and see many red, yellow, orange, green, and brown leaves are full the trees, it’s so colorful. Then, when the wind blows, every leaves move. Some move fast, and some move slowly. Nevertheless, some of it falls off from the trees, but it’s still float in the air as long as the wind blow. It floats highly and highly at a moment, and it fall down and down till it leis on the ground gently because there is no wind. In addition, I am sometimes depressed because I think, someday after I went to the top of my life, I must fall down and down as the leaves which drop to the ground without any wind handle it.

My impression

One thing which impressed me is the song, and I think, somebody might impress in their beautiful song, especially the first time when they heard the song, and like it immediately. For me, I have felt in love with the song which is English song when I was in high-school. My friends liked to listen to Thai and International songs; they listened to it from their MP3 player every day after lunch. There were a lot of songs in their MP3 player- Thai song, English song and Korean song. And I had to listen to those songs with them because that moment I didn’t have MP3 player. However, I didn’t like International songs because I didn’t understand it at all, and I chose Thai song to listen to. One day when I did the tasks attentively. I borrowed my friend’s MP3 to listen to the music, so I did the tasks and listen to the music simultaneously. Every time that I listened to music from my friend’s MP3 player I would skip the English or Korean songs, but that day I enjoyed doing the task, and I forgot to skip it. I didn’t know how many International songs that I listened to. When I finished the task already, I heard the melody of the song that I listened to, I felt like it is full of the sadness in this song, and the singer could transfer her sadness pass the song completely with her smooth voice. In particularly, when the chorus of the song is sung, I felt like, I and the singer have the same feeling: I am floating in the sky. Then I thought how beautiful this song is: I wanted to listen to it again and again. Oh! This is the sad song which is very beautiful song: I love it. Furthermore, this song made me want to know the name of this song, and then I saw the word “Everytime-Britney” in the screen of MP3 player. Now I still listen to this song every days. Besides, this song impresses me very much, and it is my inspiration to listen to any international songs. Eventually, I like to listen to those songs. Although I don’t understand its meaning, I still listen to it every day.

New Year's Resolution

Many people determine to do or don’t do something when it’s important event, especially New Year Day because it’s often the beginning to do their new things or don’t do their bad things. Surely, everyone has different resolution. Moreover I also have the New Year's Resolution for this year (2010). Many years ago, I didn’t like the children and baby too much, particularly when I see them because they always annoy me. For instance, when they cry, especially on the bus, their sound is so loud and annoying. When they suspect, they must always ask me a lot of silly questions, so when I answer, they ask me other questions again and again. In addition, they are often petulant and stubborn very much. However, I will change my attitude to them. This is my resolution. Because now I think, everything that they do is their natural habit or their innocence; I must be able to accept it. Certainly, when they cry, they want to be taken care from someone no matter what their parents or their sister. Nevertheless, when they ask me many questions, I think, they don’t know it at all and they just want to know. Many years ago, if I think like these, I will like them more, and I hope that I might do it well no matter when this year and go on.