part by part essay

I disagree with your point. In my opinion, part by part essay writing will slow the process, and decrease the accuracy of the work. I think the best way of essay writing should not be separated to three parts that are an introductory part, a body part, and a conclusion part as you said. Because each student has to write only one part by their self for a long time, and have only one time to peer with the partner. The students will lack of the accuracy of their essay before they submit to the teacher. Thus, the score will be low. On the other hand, if they write it every part at one time, they will peer with their partner, and edit the essay two to three times before they send to the teacher, so not only the score, but also the quality of the accuracy will be higher.

Should the students ware the uniform?

I oppose with your point even if the student can study, and the teacher can teach as usual, but the room will be disunity. The clothes, that are not the uniform, will be used to classify the social status of each student. Thus, poorer students might be shy or depressed with their clothes. Besides, it might become the fashionable competition of the richer students, so they will pay less attention to their education. In brief, although you think, the clothes or dressing doesn’t help in improving students' ability in learning or thinking critically, it shows the equality of all students in education. Also, they will study with their friends and their teacher without fashionable or social conflicts.