last argument

To be is going to the exam room and write for the whole 30 points VS.To assign the learners to work at home and turn it in on the due date


For me, I support the assigning learners to work at home, and turn it in on the due date because it is the better chance for the learners to improve, and get more score. I think the good writing work must be written for a long time, so they need the longer period to do. They cannot write the good work under the stressful situation as three hours in the exam period absolutely. Moreover, there will be more time for them to edit the work because at the first time of writing, they won’t see their mistakes. Thus, they can check the convention, idea, grammar, and other mistakes within this longer period for getting the high mark. Also, they will develop their writing skill more from self-checking.

In my attitude, I support the writers to teach the writing course because of their qualification. Firstly, writer is the job that deals with writing skill; besides, the writers are the professional of writing as they usually write their works. Secondly, they used to write a lot of stories in their work, so they will have many experiences than the people who have a degree in teaching English. Thirdly, the writer can choose the beautiful, creative, and suitable words choices for the work; thereby, they will transfer the sense of language, or describe the story better than the people who have a degree in teaching English. Finally, the writer may focus on the practices more than the theories. Hence, the student will get more practices and improvement of their writing skill. Although teaching in writing course is not the right work of the writer, in my opinion, they are more appropriate to teach student than the people who have a degree in teaching English.

After I read this argument, I differ with the point that Mae Fah Luang University will not take part in anything concerning this issue. As MFU are supported to build for educational object by the majority of population in Chiang Rai, all of students, teachers, and other officers here should help or cooperate with people in this province. At MFU, there are many professors; furthermore, MFU is near Mae Chan district. Therefore, we should join with them in this issue as the academic institution as you mention. At lease, we should illustrate either villagers or activists that the transport of lignite will cause the poor respiratory system of them. We should care the health of people more than the business.

part by part essay

I disagree with your point. In my opinion, part by part essay writing will slow the process, and decrease the accuracy of the work. I think the best way of essay writing should not be separated to three parts that are an introductory part, a body part, and a conclusion part as you said. Because each student has to write only one part by their self for a long time, and have only one time to peer with the partner. The students will lack of the accuracy of their essay before they submit to the teacher. Thus, the score will be low. On the other hand, if they write it every part at one time, they will peer with their partner, and edit the essay two to three times before they send to the teacher, so not only the score, but also the quality of the accuracy will be higher.

Should the students ware the uniform?

I oppose with your point even if the student can study, and the teacher can teach as usual, but the room will be disunity. The clothes, that are not the uniform, will be used to classify the social status of each student. Thus, poorer students might be shy or depressed with their clothes. Besides, it might become the fashionable competition of the richer students, so they will pay less attention to their education. In brief, although you think, the clothes or dressing doesn’t help in improving students' ability in learning or thinking critically, it shows the equality of all students in education. Also, they will study with their friends and their teacher without fashionable or social conflicts.

Effects

Many days ago, I read the news on the website, and I found the news about suicide: it’s very interesting. In the news story, the six years girl suicide unexpectly by hanging her neck on a branch of the three meters tree in front of her house due to the fact that she tried to show her another twin how the actress “E-Yen” in Sai-Sok killed her self, but she failed. In addition to watching, they try to imitate what they learn form the television by their self without any suggests from adult, especially their parents. This situation shows us how curious they are, and the real life dramas are not suitable for the children. Hence after this news published the rating for drama is also stricter.

Priority

In a week, I have to frequently face with many assignments which all teachers assign me like I never have any assignments, for example five pieces of journal keeping and lab assignment of English though newspaper course, journal of literature II course, etc. I have to arrange it by the date and time that I have to submit it, and don’t concern with its difficulty because I think I must submit all assignments to the teacher exactly. Regularly, I prioritize the assignments which I must submit it within that week first because its due date is less than seven days. It’s foremost. If you send it late, it will affect on my score or my grade absolutely. And then the assignments that its due date are the following week or next two week. I will do it on weekend, and I often do it gradually- while I did a particular assignment, I may play online games, watch movie, surfing the internet, and also do the other homework too. However, my finished assignments are rather good in quality because my emotion can affect on quality of the works. This is the way I prioritize my countless job.